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How to write a news story: a practical guide with examples
By NotepressUpdated 8 min read
To write a news story, lead with what matters most: answer what happened, who, when, where and why in the first paragraph. Then order the rest as an inverted pyramid, from most to least important, back every fact with its source, attribute every quote by name and title, and end with what happens next. No opinion, no filler.
Key takeaways
- The inverted pyramid puts the most important facts first: if the story has to be cut, it's cut from the bottom without losing the news.
- The lede answers the 5 Ws — who, what, when, where and why — and, if it fits, how, in about 30 to 40 words.
- Every fact has a source and every quote a name and a title. “Said” is almost always the right verb.
- Short sentences, active voice and no adjectives that editorialize: a news story informs, it doesn't judge.
- AI can speed up transcription and the first draft, but verification and the byline stay yours.
In this guide
What is a news story, and how is it different from a feature?
A news story, or hard news story, reports a recent, verifiable event of public interest, directly and without opinion. It isn't a feature, which tells a story with scenes and voice; an investigation, which digs deep over weeks; or a column, which argues a point. Its commitment is to the facts: what happened, who it affects and how we know.
What makes something news? The classic tests: timeliness (it just happened or just came out), proximity (it touches your readers), impact (how many people it affects), prominence of the people involved, novelty and consequence. If it passes none of them, it may not be a story.
What is the inverted pyramid, and why use it?
It's the classic structure of a news story: the most important information at the top, and everything else in descending order of importance. Its big advantage is practical: if the story has to be cut, it's cut from the bottom without losing the news. Today it has another: many readers only read the top, and search engines and AI assistants look there first too.
- Top, the lede: the main event with its 5 Ws.
- Middle, the body: details, figures, quotes and reactions, from most to least important.
- Bottom, context and what's next: background, secondary details and next steps.
What are the 5 Ws of a news story?
The 5 Ws are the questions every news story must answer. Add how, and you get the 5 Ws and H:
- What happened: the event, with a clear verb.
- Who: the people involved, with full names and titles.
- When: the date, and the time if it matters.
- Where: the exact place.
- Why: the cause or motive; if it isn't known, say so.
- How: the way it happened.
Tip
Don't cram all six into the lede
Put the two or three that make it news in the first paragraph and save the rest for the second. A lede that tries to answer everything turns into a list.
How do you write a strong lede?
The lede is the first paragraph, and it's where most readers decide whether to keep going. Four rules:
Start with the most newsworthy element
Usually the what or the who. Rarely the date, the place or the procedure.
One idea, 30 to 40 words
If you need two sentences, you probably have two ideas, and the second belongs in the next paragraph.
An active, concrete verb
“Approved,” “closed,” “raised” — not “a vote was held on the approval of.”
No throat-clearing
No rhetorical questions and no sentence that could open any story.
Example
Same lede, two versions
Weak: “At its regular Tuesday meeting held at City Hall, members of the city council voted on the budget.” Stronger: “The Valle Grande City Council approved a $120 million budget for 2027 on Tuesday that raises property taxes 8% and puts a third of spending into roads and sewers.”
What structure should a news story follow?
Headline
The main event in a few words, with a verb. It's the most-read part of the story: on your homepage, on social media and in search.
Dek (optional)
One line under the headline that adds the second most important fact.
Lede
The first paragraph, with the Ws that make it news.
Nut graf
A paragraph, usually second or third, that tells readers why this matters to them.
Body
Short paragraphs, one idea each, in order of importance: figures, quotes, reactions, context.
Ending
What happens next: dates, deadlines, next steps. Not a conclusion or a moral.
How long should it be? That depends on the outlet and the event. A brief can do the job in 250 to 400 words; a full story in 500 to 800. The rule that doesn't change: every paragraph has to add something new.
How do you use quotes and attribution?
- Attribute everything you didn't witness or verify yourself: “according to the health department report,” “police said.”
- Full name and title on first reference; last name after that.
- Quotation marks only for exact words that say something with force or personality. Facts are paraphrased.
- “Said” is almost always the best verb. “Claimed,” “admitted” or “confessed” carry a judgment; use them only when they're accurate.
- Don't change a quote's meaning when you trim it, and don't take it out of context.
- Anonymous sources only as an exception: explain why the person isn't named and how they know what they say.
What writing style does a news story use?
- Short sentences, subject-verb-object.
- Active voice: “police arrested,” not “was arrested by police.”
- Third person and past tense for what happened.
- Exact figures with units and sources; if you round, say so (“nearly,” “about”).
- Acronyms spelled out on first reference.
- No editorializing adjectives: “controversial,” “historic” or “tragic” are judgments. Let the facts do the work.
What does a well-written news story look like?
Here's a complete example with everything above applied. The city and the people are fictional.
Fictional example
2027 budget
Valle Grande approves 2027 budget with 8% property tax increase, a third for roads and sewers
The council voted 9-4; opponents will push for a senior discount.
The Valle Grande City Council approved a $120 million budget for 2027 on Tuesday that raises property taxes 8% and puts a third of spending into public works, mostly road repaving and sewer repairs.
The measure passed 9-4 after a five-hour meeting. It is the city's first property tax increase since 2022, according to the city treasurer's office.
“Without this increase, we couldn't afford to fix the east side sewers, some of which are more than 40 years old,” said city Treasurer Laura Medina.
Council member Andrea Solis voted against the budget. “The families with the least are going to pay for this,” she said, adding that her bloc will propose a discount for seniors.
The 2026 budget was $108 million. The treasurer's office estimates the tax increase will bring in about $4.5 million more a year.
The new rates take effect in January. The council will take up the senior discount on Nov. 14.
- The headline states the event and its two consequences, with verbs and numbers.
- The lede answers who, what, when and how much in one sentence.
- Every figure has a source and every quote a name and a title; the verb is “said.”
- Both sides get a voice, and the ending says what's next, without opinion.
What are the most common mistakes in news writing?
- Burying the lede: opening with background, procedure or the date, and leaving the news for the third paragraph.
- Editorializing with adjectives or loaded attribution verbs.
- Facts without a source, or rounded figures presented as exact.
- Long quotes that repeat what you already said in your own words.
- Ten-line paragraphs: on a phone they look like a wall.
- Unexplained acronyms and jargon.
- A headline that promises what the story doesn't deliver.
- Ending with your own conclusion instead of what happens next.
How can you write news stories faster with AI without losing rigor?
AI genuinely helps with the mechanical parts, as long as it works from what you reported and not the other way around:
Transcribe with AI, quote from the audio
Let a tool turn the interview into text, but check every quote against the recording before you put it in quotation marks.
You decide the lede
What's news is an editorial call. AI can suggest lede and headline variants; you choose.
Give it only verified material
Your notes, quotes, figures and documents, with the instruction to build an inverted pyramid using only those facts.
Check fact by fact
Names, titles, figures and dates against the source. The Associated Press tells its staff to treat AI output as unvetted source material, and Google recommends reviewing all AI-generated content before publishing it.
Polish the voice, then sign it
Rewrite anything generic and add the context only you know. Whoever signs it answers for it.
For the full workflow and the rules worth writing down, read our guide to AI for journalists; for which tool to use at each step, AI tools for journalists.
Where does Notepress fit?
Notepress is built for this way of working. The author writes a brief with the topic, the hard facts and the target length; the AI drafts in your publication's style profile using only that material; the journalist edits, verifies and signs; and the story publishes to your own site.
- The Fact-checker ties the draft to the material you provided and never invents a source, a URL, a figure or an attribution.
- Every story comes structured with key facts, question-style headings, FAQ and schema.org markup.
- A real byline and a measured edit: Notepress compares the AI draft with the published text and records how much the author changed it.
You can start free on the Manual plan (no AI, up to four published articles a week); AI-assisted writing comes with Pro, and paid plans include a 7-day trial. Compare the plans.
Frequently asked questions
What are the parts of a news story?
A headline; an optional dek; the lede, which is the first paragraph with the key Ws; a nut graf on why it matters; the body, with details in order of importance; and an ending that says what happens next.
What are the 5 Ws of journalism?
The questions every news story should answer: who, what, when, where and why. Adding how gives you the 5 Ws and H.
What is a lede in a news story?
The lede is the first paragraph. It sums up the most important fact by answering the key questions, usually in a single sentence of 30 to 40 words.
How long should a news story be?
It depends on the outlet and the event. A brief can run 250 to 400 words and a full story 500 to 800. What matters more than length is that every paragraph adds something new.
What's the difference between a news story and a feature?
A news story reports an event directly, in inverted pyramid order and without opinion. A feature tells a story, often chronologically, with scenes, color and a more personal voice.
Can you write a news story with AI?
You can use AI to transcribe, organize your notes and produce a first draft, but the facts have to come from your reporting and be checked against the source. The person who signs the story answers for it.
Sources
External figures and policies cited in this guide, checked on the date shown above.
- Associated Press sets its standards for generative AI (Aug. 17, 2023) — The Decoder
- Guidance on using generative AI content on your website — Google Search Central